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Lousy WIP by ~sloppyperfectionist:iconsloppyperfectionist:

Categories Manga/Anime > Traditional Media > Drawings

©2009 ~sloppyperfectionist
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Avaris and Seth in ridiculous Tudor/Renaissancey clothes.

UGLEH.

B!tch at me to finish this, please, if it looks like it's worth finishing. -_-

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~Cursors Sep 12, 2009, 11:51:44 AM
His neck is too wide and his left hand thumb is short.

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And then i was raped :(

I Am Unethical. Love ~Cursors
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~the-original-copycat Sep 12, 2009, 11:53:36 AM
Wow they look amazing, like the perfect rouge gentleman and proper lady!
Ooo I can already imagine tales of the leading lady being swept of her feet by a dashing rougue interupting a dnace in a daring robbery of the crown!!

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Pageviews mean people have SEEN your crap!
But favourites means people LIKE your crap!

I am now going to be a member of this club, because it is all about the yaoi!
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~sloppyperfectionist Sep 12, 2009, 11:54:22 AM
Thank you very much for pointing that out, kind stranger.

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"As an artist, each day I struggle to transcend my limitations and create a drawing that is at once both useless and stupid." -from a Plurker
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~Amarana Sep 12, 2009, 11:54:39 AM
Oh Seth, you sly dog you, don't think I don't know where that hand wants to go. >3< I kinda like how she seems a little tense, and considering just how he's touching her neck, I can probably understand why. Reminds me of something Ponah would do to poor Amber.

Well, I dunno if I'm very good at bitching at people to get them to finish, so here goes. *clears throat* FINISH THIS, WOMAN! *slaps table repeatedly* FINISH!

That any good?

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Current story status: 400+ pages done. Still working.

I am not looking forward to proofreading it. *shifty eyes*
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~sloppyperfectionist Sep 12, 2009, 11:55:10 AM
Lol, thanks Josh. Apparently I messed up the anatomy. I don't want to finish.

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"As an artist, each day I struggle to transcend my limitations and create a drawing that is at once both useless and stupid." -from a Plurker
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~sloppyperfectionist Sep 12, 2009, 11:57:52 AM
LOL! I'm actually not too sure about that myself. I couldn't decide where to put it, so there it is.

OH PONAH. HE GOT IT GOING ON LOL.

And thanks. XD Some random stranger came along and pointed out all the anatomy flaws, so I'm not sure I wanna finish. ^^;

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"As an artist, each day I struggle to transcend my limitations and create a drawing that is at once both useless and stupid." -from a Plurker
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~Cursors Sep 12, 2009, 11:59:22 AM
A thumb and a throat does not equal anatomy.

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And then i was raped :(

I Am Unethical. Love ~Cursors
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~sloppyperfectionist Sep 12, 2009, 12:01:41 PM
Hi there! Do you... not like me or something? O: I am well aware it is not perfect but I'm wondering why you seem to have a down on me.

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"As an artist, each day I struggle to transcend my limitations and create a drawing that is at once both useless and stupid." -from a Plurker
[link]
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~the-original-copycat Sep 12, 2009, 12:04:43 PM
It seems fine too me!
Maybe his left hand could use some work but other than that it looks all good to me, trust me everyone will make one or two small anatomical mistakes!

--
Pageviews mean people have SEEN your crap!
But favourites means people LIKE your crap!

I am now going to be a member of this club, because it is all about the yaoi!
:~iconweloveboylove:
:iconcursors:
Mood: Love ~Cursors Sep 12, 2009, 12:05:23 PM
There is no such thing as perfect. If you want that, bring a book. I dont not like you. I'm just critiquing and bitching to make you continue. Maybe if i dont use smilies or shugar my comments seem angry.

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And then i was raped :(

I Am Unethical. Love ~Cursors
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